Comment on When Cerny came to town

Full disclosure: I mostly agree with you on David Cerny: a mildly shocking artist who mostly causes the Eurocrats' brows to crease and little else.

Now, back to mocking your writing. On the misused words front, you are still hopeless.
"lush dorm kitchens" Is it tropical? Do you have over-sized harem pillows all over the floor?
"slight victory as may be..." You consider having jackasses brought to you a victory. This criteria could also work in Afghanistan.
"an absurd Technicolor climax" I have no idea what this means. It probably has something to do with New York indy bands or experimental jazz quartets I have never heard of.
"myriad urinating statues... refreshing" Myriad is not a substitute for "many." And, correct me if I am wrong, but it is absolutely not a substitute for "two." It means a vast, uncountable number. Not surprised you found it refreshing, one of the main themes of your writing is the toilet.

Which, needless to say, is where your writing belongs. Oops, cliche. Sorry, this webpage must have infected my computer.